Archive for May, 2009

Our frienemy: the exclamation point

May 28, 2009

Exclamations

There seems to be a lot of confusion these days about the proper way to use an exclamation point, and much to the chagrin of some of the creative staff here at deep, we are sometimes irritated when we receive communications from people who use exclamation points with what we would consider great fervor.

That’s why we’re dedicating today’s blog post to the exclamation point. Not because we want to be grammar fiends necessarily, but more because we want our writers to feel loved and important.

With that said, here’s a quick lesson on the right way to use the exclamation point. The Simon & Schuster Handbook for Writers says that their use is totally OK for “a strong command or emphatic declaration.” So basically, if your friend gets run over by a chair during “Race our Chairs Around the Office Day” and you’re emailing your BFF to tell him or her, you could write, “Mark got run over by a chair and his wig ripped right off in the middle of the race! Who knew that was a wig?!”

Notice, if you will, that carefully place interrobang, which, though not found in the Simon & Schuster Handbook for Writers (nor in other conventional English books), makes many writers a bit giddy with glee.

And finally, please, avoid the overuse of the exclamation point. As stated in the Handbook for Writers, “In academic writing, your words, rather than exclamation points, should communicate the strength of your message. Reserve exclamation points for occasional emphatic dialogue. Use them only very rarely for a short emphatic declaration within a longer passage. If you use exclamation points too often in academic writing, your reader will think that your judgment of urgency is exaggerated. Your choice of words, not (!) should communicate amazement or sarcasm.”

We think they’re right!!!!! Or maybe we’re being sarcastic? Hmmm…

Can an H2 be a green machine?

May 26, 2009

diesel-hybrid-linc-volt

It’s pretty amazing that Neil Young was so passionate about  his 1959 Lincoln Continental that he would dedicate his latest album to it. But what’s even more amazing is that the reason he did so was because he and a team of like-minded visionaries found a way to turn his vintage car into an electric hybrid—creating a zero emissions vehicle that gets around 100mpg. Not bad, eh?

The LincVolt website talks about Neil and his team’s goals for inspiring green technologies in the auto world, and it looks as if any vehicle—yes, even this guy and, WHOA, maybe even this guy—could run just efficiently as Neil’s sweet little cruiser. Fingers crossed, it’ll happen sooner than later.

Life in black and white

May 22, 2009

If you’re wearing sweatpants or have a tendency to walk slowly in comfy clothes, you may be really, really ill—or at least that’s what you might think if you watch drug commercials. Sarah Haskins has the phenomenal ability to make fun of ads and TV shows by simply pointing out the obvious. And we sort of love that about her.

Losing talent to Disney

May 18, 2009

mattIt is with a mixture of sadness and great joy that we at deep wish Senior Art Director Matt Stewart the best of luck as he heads to the land of yellow shoes. Matt is leaving Springfield for Orlando, where he will join Disney’s internal advertising agency, Yellow Shoes Creative Group. There, he’ll be using his incredible talent to make magic happen with pretty much everything Disney touches.

Nobody could have found a more perfect place for Matt, who was often seen drawing pictures of various Disney characters all over deep’s windows and marker boards, so while we with him the best of luck in the future, we already know he’s found his dream job.

And, finally, we also want to say another congratulations to Matt and his wife, Shea, who recently found out they are expecting a baby girl this fall. And what better place to raise a daughter than in a place where she’ll truly be treated as a princess. Congrats, Matt and Shea — you are already missed!

Bikers for Optimism

May 18, 2009

NRA Invite Cover

What do bikers, leather, studs, and skulls have to do with a half-full dose of optimism? See and hear more about our NRA (don’t worry, we’re talking restaurants not rifles) breakfast invitation here.

Honorary Devil Dogs

May 14, 2009

Marines

There are a lot of reasons that we at deep love our designer, Mark Leicht. His loyalty to the DAV, which he supports by purchasing his wardrobe solely through their thrift shops. His charming Adam-Goldberg-meets-Dave-Grohl look. His Lincoln Hawk-style arm wrestling skills. The way he so smugly keeps reminding us he’s going to Bonnaroo and we’re not. 

MAKO logo

So none of us where surprised that the 3/24 Weapons Company Marine Corps Reserve Unit based here in Springfield wanted to honor him yesterday for designing a new identity for their unit, which he developed last year. To say thanks to Mark, as well as Sherry Schellack, who helped initiate the project, the Marines stopped by with t-shirts and unit coins bearing their new logo, as well as certificates of appreciation for their service to the Marine Corps.

This unit was recently deployed to active duty, and they made sure to let us know that the new logo is helping boost morale and bring pride to our local guys. We here at deep are proud of Mark and Sherry for doing their part to support our troops. Ooh-rah!

Demetri Martin: the smartest man alive?

May 13, 2009

DemetriMartin

We think maybe. Not because of his dry wit alone. But also because of his stunning ability to write a 224-word palindrome poem. Feeling inspired, we think maybe it’s time to sell a client a palindrome-based idea. So until we figure out how to make that happen, here is Demetri‘s poem. Caution: it might just blow your mind.

“Dammit I’m Mad”
Dammit I’m mad.
Evil is a deed as I live.
God, am I reviled? I rise, my bed on a sun, I melt.
To be not one man emanating is sad. I piss.
Alas, it is so late. Who stops to help?
Man, it is hot. I’m in it. I tell.
I am not a devil. I level “Mad Dog”.
Ah, say burning is, as a deified gulp,
In my halo of a mired rum tin.
I erase many men. Oh, to be man, a sin.
Is evil in a clam? In a trap?
No. It is open. On it I was stuck.
Rats peed on hope. Elsewhere dips a web.
Be still if I fill its ebb.
Ew, a spider… eh?
We sleep. Oh no!
Deep, stark cuts saw it in one position.
Part animal, can I live? Sin is a name.
Both, one… my names are in it.
Murder? I’m a fool.
A hymn I plug, deified as a sign in ruby ash,
A Goddam level I lived at.
On mail let it in. I’m it.
Oh, sit in ample hot spots. Oh wet!
A loss it is alas (sip). I’d assign it a name.
Name not one bottle minus an ode by me:
“Sir, I deliver. I’m a dog”
Evil is a deed as I live.
Dammit I’m mad.

deep’s newest client

May 12, 2009

Some of us at deep are a bit, well, obsessed with coffee. So when we were given the opportunity to work with Torani—the leading consumer brand of flavored coffee syrups—needless to say, we deepsters were a tad bit excited to pour our hearts into the pitch.

Fortunately, our passion and excitement for the brand helped when deep was named agency of record for their restaurant and specialty beverage business. We can’t yet decide if our favorite part of being Torani’s agency is the fact that they are truly wonderful people, or that our trips to San Fransciso lead to some of the best, most creative lattes we could have ever dreamed up. But we can tell you this much: we look forward to a close, long-lasting relationship with them.

Stay tuned as we begin developing a bigger presence for Torani in foodservice, but for now, social media addicts can keep up with them on Twitter and Facebook.